Peer review

Friday 9^th March

Dear Mrs Field,

I am writing to you, and asking if you could look at my yola webpage? I still have a lot to do on it yet, but I am willing to get it done. I hope you have the time. A friend is going to look at it as well.

I think it looks good so far. All you need to do is comment about, how it looks, the colours, the layout, and spelling mistakes. Mr Stove has been giving us lots of stuff to do on the computer. We need to have it done quickly, with a good standard of quality.

I hope that you send a letter back and that you will look at my yola webpage.

http://tessg.yolasite.com/

Yours Sincerely,

Tess Gordon

This is what I got as a reply...

She said that I had lots of mistakes, and she gave a piece of paper with mistakes writen down that I had to spell right.

This is a review from my friend Baeleigh...

welldone, but too much music.

Mr Stove's Review:

Tess

Great presentation

Your photos are most interesting and look great.

A good letter and an interesting understanding of ANZAC

Keep proof reading your work carefully.

Peer reveiw from Bridgette for yola:

hi tess below is your peer review

Delete contact us page and put something else onto your home page

Your seven things is really good but you have a couple of spelling mistakes that

You may want to change you also need to add something to your poetry page it is a little bit plain

In your pictures you could add some of you or your family and your favourite things to do or some of your horses phoenix and ash your Hillary is also very but a few spelling mistakes

You need to add your term two goals to your yola page your blooms taxonomy is really good but just check your capital letters and full stops you have too many videos

Your water cycle is very very good

Other than that there is nothing you can’t change to make it better

From Bridgette

C.V (Resume).docx
Size : 15.645 Kb
Type : docx

My own Review for my C.V:

I thought my C.V was pretty good I just didn't make the big headline my name.

C.V Review from Valerie: I agree with what you have Written above. your C.V was pretty good but you could have done some sentences instead of heading every subject e.g

Dancing: Because I got...

My own Review for my Job Application:

I think my Job Application was pretty good I tried my hardest, and I forgot to go to the next line in my address, and write the date.

Valerie said she agreed with what I said.

I got 5/5 for my spreadsheet from Maddy

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